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He woke up a few hours later, thirsty. His huge hand reached out to the last jug of wine that he had retained for the morning and drank it in one single gulp. Sitting, he was as tall as most of the trees in the forest and taller than some. Raising a paw of a hand to scratch his beard, Bakasura turned towards the direction of Ekachakra. The sun was riding high in the sky and it was on its way down. Where was his food?
Bakasura rose to his feet, knocking a few trees down, without making an effort. He took a couple of giant steps towards the village and let out a roar. It was followed by an uproar as animals and birds that stayed a few miles away, took away in a hurry, not wanting to fall prey to the asura.
Bheema, who was sitting about a hundred feet away, heard the roar. A smile on his face, he continued to eat the food that he had brought from the village – the cartload that was meant for Bakasura.
Taking a whiff, Bakasura smelled human flesh and walked towards Bheema. The sight that greeted him made the asura roar again, as he beat his fists against his chest. Though hugely built for a man, Bheema was barely half the size of Bakasura. How dared he eat the food meant for the asura?
The villagers quaked as they heard Bakasura’s roar. They turned anxiously to look at Kunti and her four sons, surprised to see them smiling. Soon, they heard a keening sound of pain. That surely must be Bheema. The old Brahman who should have sent his son that day, had tears in his eyes. He had sinned by sending his guest in the place of his son. Will God ever forgive him?
A few hours later, the villagers of Ekachakra came out to see the strangest sight. Bheema was dragging the heavy cart that held the corpse of Bakasura. Cheers rent the air as the crowd celebrated the death of the asura who had been killing the people one by one.
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I had heard this story as a child Sundari. Loved the ways you gave vibrancy to this tale. I could picturize young Bheema. Loved it :D
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Hi Sundari, This is my first time here. I loved your narration of a familiar story. I read about your theme too. Historical fiction/ Mythology is one of my favorite genres to read. Consider me hooked. Glad to have found you through AtoZ.
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hey I'm doing epics too..the mahabharata is full of little gems like these and great to have read this tale...happy to join you in this challenge!
ReplyDeleteLovely retelling of a story we've heard as kids. I love your theme Sundari. Hope to read your posts throughout the challenge.
ReplyDeleteIshithaa
That was fun to read. :D How did Bheema do it?
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ina! Just the impression I wanted to create. Glad to see your comment first. It's inspiring :D
ReplyDeleteThank you Arlee Bird. That's awesome coming from you :D
ReplyDeleteHi Shanaya, welcome. And thank you. So glad you liked my narration. Will surely check your blog today :D Hope to see you visit my blog regularly
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting Maria Catalina. Will definitely check out both your blogs :)
ReplyDeleteHello again Little Princess. Thank you for stopping by. Will check your blog today :)
ReplyDeleteHi Ishithaa! I am glad you liked the story and theme :)
ReplyDeleteHi Devika, though Bheema is a human, he's blessed with the strength of a thousand elephants. That's why even his mother and brothers were quite confident that he would defeat the asura.
ReplyDeleteThough I had heard this story before, I love the way you have written it :)
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Thank you Swathi :)
ReplyDeleteThe idea is to write the story as I visualise the scene
Very well narrated. Mahabharata is full of such little gems of story.
ReplyDeleteThank you Prasanna :)
DeleteI could visualise Bakasura so well from the way you have described him!
ReplyDeleteI am so glad to hear that Lak :)
DeleteLove your theme. Mahabharat and Ramayana are my favourites. My theme this year is the Ramayana!
ReplyDeleteThank you Suzy. Will surely check out your blog :)
DeleteGreat take and I had never heard of it so happy to learn more :)
ReplyDeleteHappinessandfood, thank you for visiting and posting a comment :)
DeleteEnjoyed reading this story! So well narrated :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Shilpa :)
DeleteAlways good when a death monster bites the dust.
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The stories though known, still feel fresh in your words!!
ReplyDeleteNothing like a good old-fashioned giant-killing story :)
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I agree with you Kirsten. Thank you for stopping by :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Ruchi :)
ReplyDeleteI agree with you Tarkabarka Holgy :)
ReplyDeletei have heard this story... perhaps grandma had told me about it... still reading about it is still so interesting... i really like all characters and their tales in Mahabharata
ReplyDeleteLike the way you have narrated the story of Bakasura and Bhima. Have heard it so many times yet sounds fresh when you narrate it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Pratikshya! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Ahana :D
ReplyDeleteLove this story!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Cathy :)
ReplyDeleteI know of the tale, and it is one that I have enjoyed having my grandma narrate to me in my childhood days :)
ReplyDeleteYeah, I have heard it from my grandpa :) Thank you Vinay for stopping by and posting a comment
ReplyDeleteTook me back to my Amar Chitra Katha days :)
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DeleteBang on Bakrasura
ReplyDeleteThanks Debraj :D
DeleteWonderfully narrated.
ReplyDeleteThank you Geeta :D
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